FireSpyGirl

Thank you!

Hi there!! This is amazing and very true.

Just in case you care, I do poetry, and while I have learned about all the different pentameters, they also confuse me. I do what is called free-form, and that ...

This is really good!

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I will definitely edit this! Thank you!

Thank you! I will definitely edit this!

Hi there!! Okay, so this is a good story, and I LOVE the ending! However, I noticed a few spelling mistakes and a few other things. "I don’t got time ...

Hey! So this is really good!! I really don't have anything to say, except maybe revise the ending a little bit? I just feel like more of a cliffhanger would ...

I would clarify a little, and I would leave the title the same as it is now. I do like the "air of mystery" and when you read the poem, ...

I think maybe doing something like this: "The fault is fed, the belly full, filled by Mephisto and Zeus. I want to say it's mine, but it is a line ...

Thank you!!

Thank you!

Hi there! This is really good! I would just add some details and elaborate on some things.

Hi there! This is really good! I would just add some details and elaborate on some things.