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Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)
Hi, sorry about the overbearing descriptions. It's just that I REALLY don't like it when I can't get a clear picture of the scene in my head. The reason I ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)
Thanks for the review! I may be weird but I love it when people criticize my work. Some day I want to be an author and my books need to ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: When he is gone but hope is still here
I enjoyed your poem! But I think it was missing some thing... I don't know what though. It is definitely romantic but there is a dark twist to it. I ...
Mar 30, 2017 -
Re: lost
What is the problem here? I can tell that there is one but, can't place what it is. Does she want friends, or Some one Who loves her? THAT is ...
Feb 14, 2017