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See, that's what will make us a great mentor-mentee team! :) Opposites attract! I am thinking about continuing this. Not sure yet, though.

Aww, thanks! :) Definitely let me know when you upload it! I'll be the first to review it!

Thank you for the review! :) Grammar is no big deal! Plot is what matters most and good grammar is what edited versions are for. ;) You definitely make a ...

I know endings and beginnings are the hardest parts to write! Maybe sometime you should try writing from the middle first; that helps me sometimes and I end up being ...

I totally understand! :) I would love to read more of this and more of your writing in general!

Thanks, Veni! :) I definitely appreciate the criticism. That's the only way I can learn to write better. You definitely have a good point about the conversation with his wife, ...

No problem. :)

Well, as I stated, I don't typically review poetry. But, as I said, otherwise, I liked it a lot. I'm not a poet; I am most definitely a fiction writer ...