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Re: Diligence
Hi!! Okay, so first off, I love the tone of voice that you used for the character. It really makes it memorable. And the descriptive language!!!!!!!! It was so good!!!!!! ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: Demons
Okay, so first off, HOLY COW DUDE ARE YOU OKAY LIKE HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS IM ON THE VERGE OF TEARS. Ahem. And second off, I really liked the ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: Infatuation
Okay, so usually, I don't like poetry, but this was really something. I love the descriptive words that you used, such as 'nibbling' and 'grand and bright'. It really paints ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: in another life [strawberries and cancer are commonalities]
UhhhhhmmmmMMMMM okay so this gave me a little bit of *depression*, very well done. 11/10. There's so much emotion in this is really smacked. And, you know, death. Really powerful, ...
Feb 18, 2024 -
Re: The perfect Valentine’s Day gift…
Hi! I'm gonna leave a quick review, and I hope it helps you out. First off, PLOT TWIST!! I really like how you introduced Emma and the conflicts she had ...
Feb 10, 2024 -
Re: The Crazy One
That was a pretty great start. The beginning totally got me hooked, and the body language seemed very realistic and flowy. The script wasn't stiff at all. I would totally ...
Feb 10, 2024