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Fibarrel

  • Poetry » General, General Re: feathers on the water

    I'm not as professional as the rest of the reviewers but I'll give you my honest opinion. It was a very touching poem. It conveyed such a powerful emotion. I ...

    Feb 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: The life of a Stuffed Animal

    I liked the poem very much. You conveyed your thoughts well in the poem. I think that the addition of stanzas and a little more punctuation would have perfected the ...

    Feb 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - 4.3.A - Bipolar

    I liked how the theme of this poem is something people could sympathise with. Your word choices are used in such a brilliant way. It captivates the reader and makes ...

    Jan 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: "I Love You," She Said

    I liked the poem overall. It had a great story to tell and a bit of suspense throughout the work. I think the only thing that could have perfected such ...

    Jan 26, 2019


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