Feltrix

I haven't actually done any of the reviews yet, I'm going to try to finish reviewing The Huntress today for Featherstone, but I'll try and get there. These are the ...

@BlueAfrica, I'm having trouble replying, it's kind of wonky, so I'll just address your question up here. Yeah, Thørn Feltrix is one of my narrators.

For some reason, my replying is wonky, so I'll write it up here. @Lumi, I'm glad you enjoyed this! I agree, pacing is my biggest flaw. And, since this has ...

I'm really excited on how you think of the Academy and Quint, because that's exactly the impression I wanted to give. Quint is an interesting story, because when I first ...

I wonder where you could have heard the name "Feltrix?" It couldn't be the username of a handsome and highly intelligent, YWSer, could it?

Also, you said Agrona had three broken ribs and a broken nose? She seems fine afterward. Broken ribs cause A LOT of pain, so it seems a little unrealistic that ...

You can go a little overboard with the slang...

It saddens me when a writer stops writing, not just because of the lost possibilities, but because writing is more a process than an activity. It's an endless cycle of ...

I know I reviewed this before, but that was a while ago. This is pretty brief and does a blanket job of explaining what I think should be changed. There ...

The reason I made the bandits in the first place is because (spoilers) both Nyx and Alsari have been Flickers for roughly a century. The problem was that Nyx is ...

I tried to shift the tone of the chapter to give Alsari more character. I'm not sure if it worked, but I'm glad you made the suggestion!

I have never been a reader of romance, and so I've been desperately hoping for the entire series that Sophie won't start dating any of the boys. This got especially ...

@Wolficial, I must disagree with you. If I were a professional author (I'm not. Yet.) I would appreciate a letter from a fan who expresses there thoughts on how the ...

Hang on, what's your deadline for?

Did I load too much info into one chapter?