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Re: i used to be human
This seems more like art of the visual variety than the literary kind. Interesting concept. How did you get all of those... those things. I'd point, but that's not really ...
Dec 1, 2017 -
Re: Pitiless
Sorry, but I don't know enough about poetry to give a helpful review. Also, @FalconerGal9086
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: So, uh, space.
In the unlikely event that humankind survives long enough to have to deal with the problem, I can (almost) guarantee that it will NOT survive the heat death of the ...
Nov 23, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 29 (The Myriad book 1)
It is my personal theory that Big Brother, Nate, and now Yewis have formed a sort of council to undermine the most interesting children of our generation and implant unknowable ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 9
Nyx is also the name of the Greek goddess of night. I like to use names from mythology when I can't find any others. Nyx is also a character in ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Alsari 24 (The Myriad book 1)
Since you seem to be reviewing a lot of my works, do you want me to tag you when I come out with future chapters?
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Be With Me
So, most of the things that you said I agree with on some level (you may want to have this listed as Other instead of Short Story to avoid others ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Be With Me
Side note, I don't know how the name connects to the story....
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Alsari 28 (The Myriad book 1)
Any critiques on my transition from memory to non-memory? I feel like I could do it better.
Oct 28, 2017 -
Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1
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Oct 21, 2017
Hello, Sae! I'm here to review this chapter, which you can no doubt guess by the bold letters above. Anyway, I hope this is helpful. I. As he watched his ... -
Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1
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Oct 21, 2017
Hello, Sae! I'm here to review this chapter, which you can no doubt guess by the bold letters above. Anyway, I hope this is helpful. I. As he watched his ... -
Re: Ascension: Nyx 27 (The Myriad book 1)
Does my description of the Alok give away who he is?
Oct 20, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)
Sure!
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)
First of all, thanks for the review! And, while it's difficult to chose a favorite and I feel like I'm betraying the others by saying this, but I think Nyx ...
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)
Thanks for the review and the grammar critiques! I would appreciate anyone reviewing my chapters, but it's fine if you don't. Hail the Cosmic Squid.
Sep 18, 2017
