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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    This seems more like art of the visual variety than the literary kind. Interesting concept. How did you get all of those... those things. I'd point, but that's not really ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pitiless

    Sorry, but I don't know enough about poetry to give a helpful review. Also, @FalconerGal9086

    Nov 28, 2017
  • Other » Science, Humor Re: So, uh, space.

    In the unlikely event that humankind survives long enough to have to deal with the problem, I can (almost) guarantee that it will NOT survive the heat death of the ...

    Nov 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 29 (The Myriad book 1)

    It is my personal theory that Big Brother, Nate, and now Yewis have formed a sort of council to undermine the most interesting children of our generation and implant unknowable ...

    Nov 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 9

    Nyx is also the name of the Greek goddess of night. I like to use names from mythology when I can't find any others. Nyx is also a character in ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Alsari 24 (The Myriad book 1)

    Since you seem to be reviewing a lot of my works, do you want me to tag you when I come out with future chapters?

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Be With Me

    So, most of the things that you said I agree with on some level (you may want to have this listed as Other instead of Short Story to avoid others ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Be With Me

    Side note, I don't know how the name connects to the story....

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Alsari 28 (The Myriad book 1)

    Any critiques on my transition from memory to non-memory? I feel like I could do it better.

    Oct 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1

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    Hello, Sae! I'm here to review this chapter, which you can no doubt guess by the bold letters above. Anyway, I hope this is helpful. I. As he watched his ...

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1

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    Hello, Sae! I'm here to review this chapter, which you can no doubt guess by the bold letters above. Anyway, I hope this is helpful. I. As he watched his ...

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Nyx 27 (The Myriad book 1)

    Does my description of the Alok give away who he is?

    Oct 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)

    Sure!

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)

    First of all, thanks for the review! And, while it's difficult to chose a favorite and I feel like I'm betraying the others by saying this, but I think Nyx ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 25 (The Myriad book 1)

    Thanks for the review and the grammar critiques! I would appreciate anyone reviewing my chapters, but it's fine if you don't. Hail the Cosmic Squid.

    Sep 18, 2017


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)