Feltrix

I'll skip my standard introduction. I'm getting bored of it. I. It's spelled 'Norwegian.' First paragraph. II. "'we can continue later, and if --'" Capitalize your 'we.' III. "'It's getting ...

Hello! I'm back to review the second chapter. I. I wouldn't call Leah 'my best friend' as a title. I suggest saying something along the lines of "We'd been friends ...

Hi! Feltrix here for a review! I'll go through pointing out anything I would change, before doing an overview at the end. I. Alara is the name of a plane ...

You're probably not surprised I'm here, but I have a need to introduce myself anyway. Hello, I'm Feltrix, and I'll be your reviewer today! And you're in luck, because Kara ...

Hello! I'm here for a review, which must be pretty predictable by now. I. "'Tomorrow, princess,' Soren laughed, 'there's plenty of time to get yourself killed tomorrow.'" I think the ...

Hello! I'm Feltrix and I'll be one of your reviewers today. I was similarly caught in the middle of a chapter when review day started, but I opted not to ...

I'm back! And I'm not just reviewing this because it's review day. I had been hoping to get one last chapter of my own book in, but alas, it's only ...

Hello! Feltrix here for a review. "First came the laughs, then the doubt, followed by the realization, until finally the panic overruled. Everyone thought the media was making up ridiculous ...

Hello! Feltrix here for a review. I'm really nit-picky, sorry in advance. I. "Instead, the cavern wall rose sheer from the depths to the distant ceiling, and the yellow light ...

You know who I am. You know what I'm here for. Let's skip the chit chat and get to work. I. "They had been silent for the entire flight..." I ...

Feltrix here for a review. Again. I. "Einar had not been so humiliated since his notebooks had been snatched and passed around the drinking dens to be mocked and jeered ...

Hello! Feltrix here for a review. "She gave him her most convincing smile, which was indeed quite convincing." Instead, I'd just say "She gave him a convincing smile." Are you ...

Hello! Feltrix here for a review! I'm just going to write down suggestions as I see things. I. "Not particularly appealing. No matter how many times he did it." I ...

By now I'm sure you're used to me reviewing Prefect Machine, so I won't introduce myself. Also, it says my name next to my avatar, so that should be a ...

Hello! I've always loved retellings of fairy tales, and I love how modern objects and problems are integrated into this story. But, of course, this review would be completely useless ...