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  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Woodfolk's Child- Part 2

    It is a nice poem. It also has good meter. Though am not able to get the clear meaning of what you are trying to say. Maybe when you work ...

    Mar 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Woodfolk's Child- Part 2

    It is a nice poem. It also has good meter. Though am not able to get the clear meaning of what you are trying to say. Maybe when you work ...

    Mar 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ​Your trauma made you stronger.

    This is a great poem for someone suffering from depression. Kindly give your next poem a little emphasize on meter and perfect rhymes. Your is great it can help to ...

    Mar 1, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wishful

    It is a nice poem actually. Can you emphasize on perfect rhymes. keep writing more poems. You have great potential

    Mar 1, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wishful

    It is a nice poem actually. Can you emphasize on perfect rhymes. keep writing more poems. You have great potential

    Mar 1, 2024


Steps to enlightenment brighten the way, but the steps are steep. Take them one at a time.
— Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice)