Fatimah

No problem ^>^

Hey there, Great poem I like the whole dark theme going on here.. No complaints from me! Keep up the great work :)

Will do, thankyou kogarasumaro143.. I will follow you and I hope you do the same! Welcome to YWS :D I see you recently joined ^.^

Thanks for the comment guys :) To chetanbhasin, I see your point and I will take your advice for next time.. Proofreading my work before I submit it I definitely ...

This poem is sweet and simple. It sounds like you wrote from the heart :) Keep up the good work ^.^

Thanks for your review Mizz! About the spelling mistakes, yes 'fluctuations' was spelt wrong :$ Can't believe I never noticed that :/ And I live in the UK, so 'realise' ...

I must agree with your comment DRdante, however what parts would you say need tweeking? I always thought I should try a different style and explore different rhyming styles, but ...

Thankyou Masquerade, I appreciate your comment! I have changed the line you advised me to, which made the last paragraph more fluent when read so thanks for that :) I ...

To retrodisco666, Thanks for your comment. I do agree with your point, as I literally changed the structure of the poem when typing it in, as I thought the extra ...

Thankyou xangeleighfshox and GAM, I appreciate your comments :)

Try giving more reviews it will help with your feedback on your submitted poems! It definitely helped me :)

Thankyou Huthaifa :)

I like what you wrote it can be easily related to and you're only 14! ' I ache to see you’re gorgeousness, To breathe in you’re calming smell, To feel ...

I liked the fact that this poem is short and simple. Although the enitire poem never rhymed, the lines that did were pretty good :)

Aw thankyou SilentOllie, I really appreciated your comment :)