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Re: Euthanasia.
lolz, this is not a reiview at all, just a reminder to let you know.. 1)how much i love reading your work
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Achromatopsia
your work has this power, power to attract the reader to read on more. although i haven't posted much work, i'm much more of an avid reader than writer, so ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Let it Grow
the topic independence inspires me in so many different ways. this is one of the reason i was so mesmerized by the title, that i decided to come and read ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Paradox
They are very buggy, glitchy you could say i'm not sure if glitchy is a word. please recheck if possible:) glitch i'm 110% sure, but not that certain about glitchy. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Two Weeks, One
normally romance keeps me on the edge, but this was amazing. seriously, people on yws are AMAZING writers.:D i love the way you described each little cute events. Just the ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Embrace
Because you don't feel the same way because I want you badly I like your style of writing up to a point, especially in the beginning, when it seems like ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Weak Tears beneath The Blackest of Skies
If this was a novel in a bookstore, I’d buy it, just because of the title, and if this is how you continue writing rest of the novel, I won’t ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Sound of Distant Thunder
Hey. First I’d like to begin by how breathtaking your work is:D someone mentioned that your writing is angry and harsh, but that’s what personally appeals to me in this ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Sky is Beautiful
But my body is weak; my mind decrepit with scars that run years long and not even time is at my side. Immobile in the cool sands of the desert, ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: The Ocean
I have watched the water crash through our community, tearing a path for its swells of destruction. I have see it drown children and men alike - it has no ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Life is perfect
your work was on the sidelines of the website, and from all the wor's title, your stood out. LIFE IS PERFECT are the three rarest words in todays generation, and ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Detachment
i find dark themes really remarkable, and your work fit that category perfectly:D so i won't be able to find any fault in it. i am mesmerized by the way ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: The Night
you are only 15 and write this good:D i am amazed:D (in a good way:P)... the whole poetry revolves around *the Night* and you didnt stray away from that, which ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Coming Out as a Human
I had to defend both to James and to myself why I believed what I did. this line clearly states that you are a normal human being, having the on ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Like 98'
i have never been to spain, but your poetry makes me want to go there:D! i think that enough should be a great compliment. your vocabulary, your usage of it, ...
Oct 14, 2011
