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Far1812

  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship

    Geez louise. This is wonderful. Hai Dutiful, I'm Far1812. I'll be reviewing this lovely piece of literature this evening. So. Let's get started. This short story is a fine work ...

    May 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Guarded: Until Death

    Hey Sweet Sour! It's Far again. I know it's a little odd for me to review your first chapter second, but oh well... WRITING Hey, I've just noticed the cleverness ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chasing Eden

    I've only got 10 minutes, so the clock's-a-ticking. Wow! Your writing style is enthralling. A reviewer below described it as "slick," which is apt, in my opinion. In particular, you ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Guarded: Mother's Approval

    Hiya Sweet Sour! Let's get into this review. GRAMMAR So, I've decided to refrain from pointing out/correcting problems in other people's grammar. As such, I will not be pointing out ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: In Pursuit of Inspiration: Chapter 1

    Hey, Alice! I'm still new at this whole reviewing shindig, but hopefully my two cents are worth considering. Anyhoo, onward to the actual review: I am a firm believer in ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Elysium - Prologue

    Oh man! This is a sweet prologue. It doesn't tell too much, it gives us two characters that we can care about, and wraps it all up with a shocker ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 1 [Original Draft, Absolute Garbage]

    Hey BlueJayWalker10. Here are my thoughts: PROS I can tell you've read fantasy--that opening! Very nice. The setup: A crazy king who searched for a fabled artifact instead of ruling? ...

    Apr 11, 2016


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