FakeCrow

Very intersting story, written in the form of a confession letter. I think the story is good, the idea and premise is fantastic, so besides a few grammar mistakes, this ...

looks like you might have used the wrong instances of words in a couple of spots. Example: He felt ashame(should be ashamed) for himself. Also, the formatting, to me, seems ...

Awesome job! This was a good story with an interesting look at a hit-man's work I didn't notice any grammatical errors, the only thing is I think you spelled organization ...

This was magnificent, very superb work. There's been a ton of things on Snow White recently, two movies and a tv show, so the timing for this story was perfect. ...

I don't know a whole lot about poetry, but I can say that I enjoyed reading this piece. It seemed to flow well, but that's just my opinion. I didn't ...

This was really good! You did a really good job of explaining things just enough to keep it mysterious. It really hit me on what's going on in the story ...

You said you need help with dialogue, but it seemed to be fine. I think you did well making a compelling story, but there were several misspelled words. I think ...