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Hmm. Lorraine seems superficial to me, so it was surprising that she took the time to bring the dogs home, especially when dogs hate her and she obviously isn't too ...

I'll start by saying I liked this. But now I'll dive right in :D There was a bolt of lightening just overhead telling all who witnessed its might that the ...

*winces* No walking the plank or choruses of "aye", please? They're both overdone. This will have a much more original feel to it if you just remove those those cliches. ...

Corina and Daniel have an interesting relationship, that's for sure. Some of the phrases you use makes it appear as if they might have stronger feelings for each other, but ...

Interesting, to start. The idea of "imbalanced layers" is a cool concept, and it will be neat to see where you're taking it. I didn't find much wrong with the ...