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Re: Makeshift | Chapter Three
1) Loving the picture, I must say! 2)My name's Hannah! There, my first two random thought out of the way, I can get down to business. I adore your command ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: Pain
I suggest you separate your verses and such. The large paragraph is slightly daunting! ;) I enjoyed the piece, but some of the lines just seemed slightly awkward, such as; ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: The Big Red Button
Very cute! ;) Rather predictable, and, in my opinion, slightly anticlimactic, but cute none-the-less. Made me giggle a bit. The reviewer before me picked up everything I noticed, especially considerin
Mar 10, 2013