Faery007

Ahh, my dear! I have to say, after just finshing the works of Edgar Allen Poe, you reminded me so vividly of him. I thought that your poem was very ...

Drip, drip, drip. I like the beginning, good start! The room is rank with your fear, Does this mean that you can smell his fear? Try to make it a ...

He sees her legs are sound and shapely, Lovely metaphor there . firmly planted in the ground: ___ a graceful maple sapling, ___ victim to the Abenaki. If she stands ...

Hi! I'll be doing a short review on this essay, startingggggg now! mmm...It's good but you could do with expanding it a little. Essays are usually 2 pages in length. ...

Wow, for such a young age, you have fantastic potential! Hmm..I couldn't really find any faults with this poem...I loved the imagery and meaning you put into it. You can ...

I feel compelled to write a review after what the previous person said ^^ I actually quite like the rhyming of this poem, even if it is a little bit ...

Hi, I actually really like this poem, it shows that life is a bit like a blank canvas that you need to paint it also shows that life has a ...

Love, hate, happiness: these are all abstract concepts. Many, maybe all, poems are, deep down, about emotions and other abstractions, but it's hard to build a strong poem using only ...

Your Poem Is a truly good one, with some amazing words and meanings to it, I am sorry for writing a review that was not mine, I am lazy and ...

Love, hate, happiness: these are all abstract concepts. Many, maybe all, poems are, deep down, about emotions and other abstractions, but it's hard to build a strong poem using only ...

Hello I am Hayley and I'll review your poem todayyyy Like KnightlyAngel09 said I absolutely LOVE your opening, it's simple, short and yet doesn't explain too much where your left ...

Hi, I sang this song to my self, and I thought it sounded amazing, and I'm not joking. The words you used were outstanding and I thought the rhythm flowed ...

I'm your best friend but now she is too. Here's where the big problem comes in We are both in love with you The only thing that's different About her ...

Hellooooo! My name is Hayley and I will be your reviewer for today! I'll start with the first stanza and actually finish with it hehe if that makes sense 0_0 ...

Hello, I like this poem, very much. That's all there is to say really, I find no faults in the entire poem and I think the imagery is outstanding, the ...