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Re: Please wake up, we miss you.
Hi! Great poem. First off, I don't see the need for the capitalized 'C' in 'coma'. While I see it is an important part in the poem, it is a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Deviousness.
Hi. So first, i'm getting the feel that maybe she is maybe preforming a play or speech on stage and gets stage fright. I may be completely wrong but that's ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: The Warning of the Sorting Hat
Hi! Just want to say, I love Harry Potter, clever piece you have here. So first off, i'd like to mention spelling. If you look at paragraph 4, sentence 2, ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: The Story Of My Mind
Wow, just wow. You have a really amazing work here. I love how you get into the detail and the soul of it. The only criticism i can think of ...
May 15, 2014