FRAYEDjade

I love this. It's so complete and well rounded. I love that you portrayed a story as well as internal conflict. You have so few words but I can feel ...

Hi. :) I love that you wrote this poem about Irene. It was a poem that needed to be written. Anyhow, I love the idea of it. Your mixed feelings ...

Hi. I'm Jade. I like your poems. Poem #1 I really like your language here. Your way of describing the ordinary with unusual language is very pretty. Although I like ...

Hunger Games. (For shocking, heartbreaking, gutwrenching storytelling) The Host. (For beautiful characters, a fantastic theme, wonderful plotline, and a true sense of family) Uglies Series. (For the k

I don' know if I truly understand the poem/title relationship here. With the title 'Fighting With Tenacity' I expected there to be fighting... with tenacity. But the only thing this ...

Hey there. This poem caught my eye because I also happen to love Sylvia Plath. I definitely think that this is a good poem. Lots of imagery, a good rhyme ...

I'm always impressed at people who can rhyme well, and you certainly do. This poem's AAAB rhyme scheme is great, not forced or over-the-top. It has a nice lilting quality ...

I really liked this, I liked it's simplicity as well as its obscure structure. You definitely have a few great moments in here. My favorites were "of blood and bones ...

Hey, how are you? I'm Jade by the way. I also think that this poem is quite good. When I read your disclosure before the actual poem and then the ...

Hi there. I'm Jade, nice to meet you. First of all, I do really like your story. I think your writing style is fresh and unique, and while some might ...

I liked the whole idea of this poem, the keys and the locked hearts, it's good imagery. But I'm not sure that I actually liked the poem itself. I felt ...

I did like this poem a lot. It took me reading it a few times to actually understand what it was about, but once I did I thought the idea ...

I thought this was a beautiful story. Rags to riches in a lilting tone of voice. I liked how you portrayed the first part of the story, very sinister, cynical, ...

Hello there. I'll start by saying that this was a nice story and I did enjoy reading it. However, I did find some stuff that put me off. For me, ...

I'd have to say Julie of the Wolves, I forced myself to read it in 4th grade for AR points. My Side of the Mountain, as you can see I'm ...