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Re: The soul is eternal
darko.demark666, Well, This poem doesn't really follow a line formula. It doesn't really follow a rhyme formula. the only formula is, two words in the first bit, three in the ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Welcome, Storm
That was beautiful. I do not know if I can accurately say anything about this powerful poem Another day dawns. Halogen hemisphere, polishing the grass-blades until they throw light around ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: I wish you'd die, Love
OOh. Ouch. May I suggest you act on your anger? :twisted:
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Run through water
About the spelling and things, I like to put "hiddens" in my poetry. Hiddens are things that are weird and add (I think) to the poetry. If you look hard, ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: The Adventures of Sock-ee, the Lost Sock:
Socks are amazing. :elephant:
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The Atheism of Trees
I agree.
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: chapter Two, three
Heay!!! check out the first chapter before reading this! It's on my featured works!... :oops: if I can figure out how to use it!
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Calling Your Name Again
actually, I thought the repetativness added effect. It made the poem sound more rhythmic, but if you're going to do that, you need to use exact repetativeness.
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: nvm 4
You are disturbed :shock:
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: My notebook
That was amazing. I loved it. You really spoke from your heart. Your flow excellent, with one rhythm flaw in the last line. You are a very good poet. sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Bad Boy
It was really good, except for one minor detail: in the first two lines you used "seem" twice. Was that for effect?
Jan 31, 2009