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Perhaps the chords should go with it. A lot of songs sound weird when you can't hear the music. Also, in songs try for more cleverness and wit. That's the ...

Review you Newb! Once again, FLOW!!!! Focus on it! More once you review. If you do good I may adopt you.

Actually, this is a short story of mine that I translated into a play for a production we are doing in school. The wording is a little "jacked up" Actually, ...

um... Hon? Are you OK? I think the date on this post is scary...

I really liked this. Wow. I thought it was... disoriented. That was the feeling in the piece. Scary. It make me feel like I do when I am dreaming about ...

Thanks so much for your review. I am slowly editing this post on paper, so it will soon be much improved. I will then re-post, so I may need another ...

Genius. It was simple, concise, ARRG! The Dop!!! It made me angry with you! I swear, you fall only to spite me Wonderful!

I wrote this at like, ten o'clock last night, and I woke up this morning, re-read it, and was like WTF? This story sucks! AAAARRG!!! So now I shall have ...

I love the blues. So this sits good with me, but I think you need to incorporate a chorus into your song. Something that makes sense after all the stanzas. ...

The moon at noon Is a commodity and an oddity That is my opinion on the moon at this present date. As to your poem, I liked how it was ...

This poem was very free-flowing and confused. You are good at poetic verse. Congratz at the decision to keep writing! Why ever would you want to stop?

Thanks for your comments.

The reason I added all the smileys is because this was originally a story told verbally, with much facial expression to spice it up and make it more interesting. Without ...

Thanks everyone, This is one of my favorite stories of all time. It seems like everyone else likes it too. :D If possible, I would like even more feed-back.

A good attempt on a very complex poem. Needs some work. lovely. Sounds as if the young girl is in the Great Plains