FLyerS

I like what you're trying to accomplish, but honestly I was bored through the whole thing. Use more powerful words. Don't let them fall flat. You were being way to ...

Very descriptive! But you need to work out a few small flow changes. This type of writing is very much like poetry or music. You must let it flow to ...

Oh. My. God. You just summed up every teenager's view of their parents. Sometimes you just want them to let you GO! :smt059 :smt051 Awesome! And, I liked how you ...

TOTALY AGREE!!!!! Have you seen that poster that says: CENCORSHIP HAS BEEN FOUND TO CAUSE BLINDNESS IN CHILDREN.? Any way... you should talk to me the next time you're online. ...

Very powerful. I like the last lines, about freedom of speech and the right to remain silent. In fact, you're too good. You are making me feel bad about my ...

Is this about Twilight? because if it is, don't waste your talent writing about something that is now so common place. Everyone is writing about that story. Don't be every ...

Well, I think that was good. I don't know if you care, but personally, I like a perfect sense of rhythm in my poetry. I would switch a couple of ...