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this is very beautiful work. you had me hooked at "closing in closing in" however the variation between first person and third person is a little confusing where you first ...

hmmm mysterious! i like it, you got a good thing going on here! I'm not ever particularly a fan of non-rhyming poems but this one did have me a bit ...

i absolutely loved this poem! good job with the rhyming. i actually wish there was more versus because it was like you were telling a little story. The first two ...

i really liked the way this has been written, a poem kind of letter. it's the perfect example of where we're all been at some point in life. The use ...