EzraNovea

I really enjoy your use of rhythm in this piece. It makes for a flowing structure, and the length of each line allows the use of an AABB rhyme scheme ...

I really like your use of the AABB rhyme scheme, it gives a really interesting dichotomy between the first and second part of each verse. I like your use of ...

One thing in your poem that stood out to me was comparing a lantern (Or flashlight?) To a flower, specifically a narcissus. I assume that specific type is significant in ...