ExposedSoul

Wow. This is great! I feel as though I have just opened an instruction manual on awkwardness instead of reading a last minute homework assignment. (I also found your examples ...

Okay.... Where is the conflict? It sounds as if your just exploring a characters thoughts, not writing a story. Please add some conflict.

Wow. I loved the anger. It made the story so realistic I felt as if I was there listening to the horrible drumming. And the purple shirt mystery... awesome. You've ...