I never was a good student. The reason is not clear to me still. A commerce student, what I was. I strongly believed that I had been married to a girl named commerce and I was in love with humanities. Literature always attracted me. History always frustrated me but I liked to know about human aspect. Computers had been the most intellectual subject with me. Finally, economics, the loveable subject I had. In commerce, I had only computers and economics. Rest I did not know. I was aware but I know nothing about the rest subjects.
Accounts were my playing period and subject. I used to laugh a lot on others jokes and on mine too. Addition, subtraction, multiplication and division were instance’s fun not accounts. For us, addition meant one more joke. Subtraction meant teacher was irritated and had to stop. Students and teachers are still alive but their laughter is died in past. Past has something which we can’t forget because it is something we can’t forget.
That time we calculated our future based on past and present. Now, future is present and that present is past. The same phenomenon is obtained. Economists use the data of past and present to predict the future. Their prediction decides the market condition in future era.
Economics was not the only subject in which I was interested. Economics’ theories and computer’ java programs’ formulas were my winning secret. I had been an average student but I was not an idiot. Family’s pressure and peer groups’ charm is something which I can’t ignore. May be, you too. May be you are stronger than I am.
‘You should apply your studies’ knowledge in your real life. Virtual life is just a lie.’ Someone told me this. I forgot the name.
The theory of demand and supply, the reason of pass and fail in exams. We study hard and we pass or vice-versa. As the demand increases so the supply will increases.
Don’t’ you think? There are numerous theories in economics which are closely related with life. Central tendencies, dispersion and correlation are related with problems and solutions, success and failing, and life and death respectively.
I had the same body and mind like others but I was different. I had my own way to walk. I knew how to make studies work for life. Scientist, economists and engineers are not same but their ladder was same.
There is one more property of Java called debugging. I thought in life, there was also one quality which was similar to debugging called self help.
Everyone can heal its life like Java. Java always tells us there is a mistake like our inner voice tells us where we are wrong.
I can write numerous pages on my theories. There is nothing which we can’t know. You should ask ever word, every line and every book. I asked questions to my subjects. They answered me. They told me answers.
Now, I am here, contented and happy man.
Now, it’s your turn. Be curious.
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Hi there, surajjangid! Is this a piece of fiction, or just some of your own thoughts? If they are your own thoughts, I agree that they do not belong in the fiction forum, but that being said, I think you have good things to say. This piece is articulate, and with a little work, could be a great bildüngsroman. If you add a little more concrete narrative instead of abstract thought, it might be a little more engaging. Also, try to make the call to action to be curious at the end stand out by contrasting it with consequences of indifference.
Thanks for sharing this piece!
Hi there Surajj!
As Exposed said, this doesn't seem to have a story behind. More like a collection of thoughts. And so, it doesn't really fit in with this category.
That said, this was written pretty well. I never liked Commerce subjects, so reading about it is always interesting.
The starting two lines were a bit boring. It would sound better if you started with the line about marriage.
~Lava
Okay....
Where is the conflict? It sounds as if your just exploring a characters thoughts, not writing a story. Please add some conflict.