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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The loss of a loved one

    First let me say that I am sorry this ever took place. Second the writing is amazing. The pace, spelling, and grammer were all great but I think what I ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A speech on bullying

    This is a very well written speech and I have only two suggestions: 1. I know not everyone will listen to me and bullying will never end, but if we ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: The Life Of A Writer

    A couple things: 1. What happened to the Girl Scout? You put her in the script but never took her out. 2. Where did the Twilight haters come from? Was ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Childhood.

    This is great because there is not a single person on the planet that can't relate to this. We have all either gone through it or are going through the ...

    Dec 20, 2010


it is quite something to wound someone and then pity their scars
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