Explosive_Pen

Hi Angel. ^^ First of all, U is a letter. You is a word. They are not to be exchanged. To me, one of the rudest things in the world ...

xD Shina, this is amazing. I officially love you. Sure, the rhythm might have been off in some places, and yeah there were a few unintentional rhymes that threw me ...

Hi again! Another pet-peeve of mine is dredging up old pieces, but since you asked so nicely, and I did promise you three reviews, I'll make an acception. :D The ...

Eeep, there's more! I haven't read this part yet, so yay! You are automatically awesome for posting a second part. That whole first part about the numbers.... Huh? Where is ...

Hi tnme! Here as requested! Sorry it took me so long, but I've been really busy for the past few weeks. I've actually read this before, but couldn't find anything ...

Rawr, dear, please don't talk back to the reviewers. They are honestly trying to help, and if they spend hours trying to better you as a writer, you should thank ...

Hi! Here as requested. :) The scent of fire, I thought, as I hunched over the carcass of a deer. Thoughts should be in italics, and no comma after thought. ...

Here again! :D A stream of crimson surged down the coward's face, forming a pool of the substance below his chin. Ah, you have potential for a hook here, darling, ...

Hi! Here as requested! First of all, your title is win. :D Hidden behind thousands of dancing clouds was the faint glimmer of orange. The faint glimmer of tomorrow. I ...

Here as requested! Gah... *Gets off her lazy butt, groans, and proceeds to review.* I tried to keep my pace, suppressing the want of running towards him. I don't know ...

Poppity! Can it be? Have you brought me out of my reviewing rut? Yes. Thanks for the title making me laugh and for making me stop being lazy. =] Anyway, ...

Hi there! Tell me u didnt feel my feet touching yours in the hot summery air by the pool, and in our room Or my hands feeling your butt, and ...

Emily!!! *Tears piece apart* xD Love is something that has changed drastically within the past few years. Since you talk about the sixties in the next paragraph, change years to ...

Hi there! I haven't read your first chapter, but I'll do my best, alright? The last couple of days went by fast; I think this should be "the last couple ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS. :wink: I'm not really used to seeing such short poems, so this kind of shocked me. I was sort of waiting for the rest to ...