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Thank you :) and please ignore all the rushed errors. This was for that hunger games thing and the deadline was about 2 hrs away :)

Thank you :) and I saw the Fault in our Stars for the second time yesterday so that # just gave me many feels!

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

By the way, I just noticed how many of these stories you have written. You are going to get a lot of reviews from me soon.

Alright, thanks. I'll publish the edit when I'm next on a laptop :)

I've edited the Jonnie/Allan switch but I can't figure out a way out a way to smoothly get into Elayna's perspective. Do you have any idea how I could do ...

It was great :-). Really livened up homework!

I did that in primary seven - in fact it made up my entry for the Hunger Games Final Battle :)

Okay, I'll edit the rest of this chapter then try and find a way

Hey Buggie. If I put like, three asterisks between the Jonnie perspective and the Allan perspective, would that help? I really want to develop a sort of Michael Grant style ...

Oh my god I am so happy for you! You did amazing! Quick thing - you say about his viola 'it's'. It should say 'its'. Also about his crisis, I'd ...

You're welcome :-)

Thanks :)

Also, the reason he wanted to help was because Incineriol had a plan to attack the humans. Do you have any idea how I can make it clearer that he ...