ExOmelas

It makes sense. Some stuff can be pretty terrifying out there :)

Ah right Ok. You may want to mention that :-)

Hey, um, I just wanted to mention, 1, that perverted fanfictions have a purpose. They seem to be both very enticing and very easy to write. They seem to get ...

Ok, good :)

I'll take a look but if you like I'll wait till you're happy with it before I review

Hey, Pinkie. Listen, Strange isn't trying to be rude ( are you Strange? ;) ). It's just that the whole point of YWS is to review. I won't review it, ...

So I was going through the green room and I saw this and made a decision. I am going to read this story. I am going to go to chapter ...

If you want. It's the same message anyway. *shrugs* You're welcome :)

You're welcome :)

*has included some setting and a little background just after Chip sees the monkey and his fox girlfriend* could you have a look please? :)

*has included some background now* :)

Thank you, I will definitely work on setting. Also, children's tv is exactly what I was going for!!! :)

You mean like background stuff? Maybe at the start of the first one I could have a paragraph like: "Chip Puccoon, leader of the Puccoon spider monkey clan, was also ...

Thanks, Rave! I'm doing 2 more parts for it so I'll introduce the other patients in one of them :)

The english part? It's supposed to be for kids and so I don't really know what to put in place of x-ray goggles that kids would understand. I was going ...