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haha ok :)

Thank you, Noelle! We'll try and find a way to flabbergast you while editing. :)

You're welcome :-)

So glad you're engaged! The typos were British spellings and I don't want to give too much away but they tie in with the mundane-ish names of most of the ...

Thanks Timmy! And yes, this is Mess' chapter :) About the character development in my chapter, I have loads of ideas for things I can add in. I don't even ...

Haha :D

Thanks, Timmy! We (Mess and I) shall get to work :-)

I definitely couldn't tell it was your first story! Well done and I hope you continue to write :-)

Ah, I understand. And you're welcome :-)

*is about to curtsey * *defies gender stereotype and bows instead* Haha, it's Ok. Mess thought I was a boy at first too. ;)

You're welcome, and good luck with Nico :-)

1. Working title (I think) 2. Will work on giving this more ties. 3. Will stop calling all of them kids. They definitely range in age. 4. (and possibly most ...

haha :) Monkeys are so cuuuuuuuuuuuute :D

Thank you very much! And congrats on your first review. I hope you're enjoying the site and if you have any questions feel free to PM me. :)

Thank you! There is actually a reason behind the names which will become clear later :)