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ahhh i'm so glad you like it :D

Ahhhh thank you! Also stupid cctv cameras, stupid logistics getting in the way of my plot xD

yeah, the cliffhangers might be getting a bit much. I think it's actually part of the nature of posting on YWS. When i post chapters I feel like each one ...

Hmm okay I think it might be best to hold off until I drop the answers for some of these, then we can figure out what the most logical things ...

Hey, yeah, this totally makes sense. I'll moderate his emotions a bit when it comes to editing. As for why she was at the panda enclosure, is it not believable ...

thanks for the review Eagle! :D

Okay I've brute forced it in to see if that works logistically

Woot woot! Yeah, maybe I'll stick an explanation of the arrival time in the start of the chapter before Eagle gets here and see if that seems to work xD

Ono *has no idea what is going on because they%u2019ve been busy with uni*

Also lol love the new name xD think this might be the first time you%u2019ve changed your name in as long as I%u2019ve known you?

Ima reply properly to this later because omg you are so sweet, but it%u2019s not that neuromax don%u2019t know that any of the animals talk, just Aurora. The fact that ...

Thanks for such a quick review! I think the problem I was imagining is that presumably some professionals from Patrick's old company, or people they trusted to hire, did it ...

Thanks so much for the review! I had no idea you intended to keep doing these but I'm glad you are :) Patrick's age: yeah, this has come up. I'm ...

Hey Stella! These are really good points about the motivations and definitely stuff I'd be calling other people out for. I'll figure out some stuff to retcon in in an ...

hehehe fair