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Thanks for the German help! I really wasn't expecting that but that was great ^.^ (and not too nit-picky at all :D) And thanks for the rest of the review ...

oops sorry Jabber, that was meant to be a reply to something else entirely XD

Thanks for the German help! I really wasn't expecting that but that was great ^.^ (and not too nit-picky at all :D) And thanks for the rest of the review ...

Hey, thanks for the reviews! The things you point out as not making sense are generally either me missing how things could be interpreted, or in one case straight up ...

ahhhh i see. good to know :)

aha yeah so the reason you don't remember Duliop is that I thought him up about two weeks ago xD He'll definitely get a bigger part in the redraft. His ...

Hey hi idk why I didn't see this at the time but thanks for the review! :D

aaaaaah I keep forgetting about Myal - she absolutely has made friends I just don't know their names or who they are xD Thanks for the review! :D

Okok I hope it gets less first draft-y from here because this was the last week of LMS and I slowed it right down for chapter 18. I think good ...

Okay, I think you broadly are being suspicious of the things I hoped you would be. There are definitely two things that I hope don%u2019t quite add up - Erson ...

Hmmm... I never really intended for Alkset to feel like she had an ulterior motive. She's supposed to be sort of like the Federation from Star Trek - reaching out ...

Yay, thanks for the review! :D Yeah... Erson has ideas... You'll see them beginning soon. I was hoping that him being interested in the carriage is sort of in flavour ...

Ahhhhhh i'm so glad this was your reaction!! All of this is exactly what I'm going for ^.^ I should warn you that I lose my momentum for a couple ...

@HarryHardy I think I answer most of your confusion here :)

ah okay i should clear some things up. apologies this wasn't clear in the draft, but hopefully if i can set things straight now this can be more enjoyable going ...