ExOmelas

'How does one Identify a sociopath?' - I doubt that capital 'I' is supposed to be there. 'when I woke up laying next to Max' - 'laying' should be 'lying'. ...

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Sorry, I accidentally posted the same review twice. I'll contact a mod at some point to have this removed.

bleurgh I joined YWS because I didn't like Wattpad. Nobody ever helps you so how are you supposed to get any better? Also, people only read your stuff if you're ...

Why is there a bullet-point at the start? 'To this day when ever I feel depressed' - 'whenever' is one word. 'As I shoved my feet back in to my ...

'the line disconnected without another word.' - This should have a capital letter at the start. 'My fist instinct was to say I had the wrong number' - 'fist' should ...

'I defiantly didn't want a man weighing me down.' - this kind of makes sense but I can't help but wonder if 'defiantly' is supposed to be 'definitely'. If not ...

'Like two little specs of black that silhouetted the setting sun' - 'specs' should be 'specks'. 'Where as the boy looked' - 'whereas' is one word. 'What caused the look ...

heehee, I know what you mean. Just the one nit-pick: 'You know, is all true.' - shouldn't 'is' be 'it's'? I'm not sure about the italics. I feel like the ...

So, I don't know exactly who the Lone Wolf is. Right now I'm thinking communism because lots of people are scared of communism. Whoever it is, maybe you could add ...

Wow. There's an advert on TV right now for channel 4 where this kid that got over a stammer during a show called Educating Yorkshire reads a poem out promoting ...

'"Oh yeah," I lie' - there should be a comma between 'oh' and 'yeah'. 'Maybe you should go in, your eyes will be better.' - this should be either two ...

'Sarah moaned and sat up her blonde hair a mess.' - there should be a comma between 'up' and 'her'. '"Don't know yet. My boyfriend is surprising me." She said ...

'We see her in her ceremonies, we see her royal coach' - I think that comma should be a semi-colon. 'The question that is on my mind and I need ...

'Jeez you're dumb sometimes' - there should be a comma between 'Jeez' and 'you're'. I'm not sure about the big giant paragraph of background. If you're determined to have it, ...

Okay, Tigga, I am going to try my best to review this here. I can do it. First of all, I have an actual legitimate suggestion. I think the title ...