ExOmelas

Hey again. I think I'm going to do at least 5 today, but probably not more than 10. I didn't realise how many chapters you'd already published xD Nit-picks and ...

Hey, since the After Watch is looking in pretty good shape, I figured I had time to come all the way back to the start of this and review each ...

Hi again, Nit-picks and nice moments: I didn’t know how much time had passed by, when I finally heard something. Also you don't need that comma. As it drew closer ...

Hey, I saw ch2 of this in the GR and wanted to do an After Watch review but there's considerably less urgency than when you're trying to do the clearout ...

Hey, After Watch review coming to you :) hung itself high It took me a moment to realise what didn't quite work here but I think it jarred because this ...

where was I when I was last upon your spine? For a bit this threw me. Being upon someone's spine makes it sound like you're holding onto their back, or ...

Hey, apologies for the fact that I'm stepping in quite far into the novel. Green Room nearly clear... Nit-picks and nice moments: What if she found the gun? I mutter ...

Hey there, I'm really sorry this is a brand new reviewer so far in, but you're the third-last review in the green room and I really want to try and ...

Good lord how did you manage to get 4 reviews already xD I was hoping for a Green Room review :P No matter, onwards! Nit-picks and nice moments: Maia's blood ...

Hey, sorry I haven't read the other parts of this, but the Green Room only has 6 works left and I'm really trying to clear it out. Nit-picks and nice ...

Hey, getting this out of the green room. A minority (about 6%) of Christians say that they accepted Christ after the age of 18 I'm really unsure how this strengthens ...

Hello again! Nit-picks and nice moments: Amanda planned to practise witchcraft This makes it sound like she knows what she plans to do, which seems unlikely. get some straw as ...

Hey there, I'm just going to quickly review this then do the one in the green room. Nit-picks and nice moments: “Stop coming near our home!” This is a little ...

Hey there, welcome to my conquest to clear as much of the green room out before my family come over at 6 :P I like how you personify anorexia (Ana, ...

Last part :) Nit-picks and nice moments: In the background, I heard my father shout, “ You tell Georgia to take this seriously. ” In the most minor nit-pick of ...