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Yay! Nit-picks and nice moments: When Asha realized that the landscape was beginning to match what she remembered from childhood, she almost felt winded. Ooh that was subtle! That might ...

Hey there, here for my team tortoise review of the day :) I'll do some nit-picks as I go through then comment on it overall in a few different categories. ...

Hey, welcome to my 350th review! Oh man that was so close to no nit-picks: and i t f we predict Actually I think that particular sentence needs some work. ...

Hey, just quickly reviewing this chapter before bed so I can stay on track for Team Tortoise :) Nit-picks and nice moments: A t first glance The percentage of overweight ...

Hey, finally got round to this :) Nit-picks and nice moments: The long days of travel were mostly uneventful, and it seemed to Asha that silence began to swell between ...

Hi there, I'll do nit-picks (and mention nice moments) as I read through it, then talk about it overall in a couple of categories: in which she sat on the ...

Hiii again! “I will lick you!” He leveled a pair of pliers in her direction and waved them about. “I really will! Do not try me!” I nearly burst out ...

Hey there, Nit-picks: just walked down a caldesac This might be a British/American thing but I've usually seen that written as "cul-de-sac". Twist snorted. “The police are too busy investigating ...

A-ha! I knew I had a review request I'd forgotten about xD Nit-picks: Ms. Johns , would you The one that stood out to Jillian the most, however, was an ...

Heyyyyyy! Nit-picks: He helped her carry Dragon out, although Jack took on most of Dragon’s weight. Fox seems pretty strong; why is Jack doing that? Is she feeling weak because ...

Hey there, here on behalf of Team Tortoise for my one review a day :) I'll do nit-picks first then divide my overall critique into a few categories. Nit-picks: leave ...

Hey there, here as requested, I'll do nit-picks then go through some categories to talk about it overall. Nit-picks: Everyone who seemed different from the normal public—gays, sexually immoral peopl

Hi again, I'm doing Team Tortoise this month which means you are my one review of the day :) Nit-picks: Okay first of all a meta nit-pick. Do you have ...

Yassss this is still in the Green Room! Obvs that's less good for you but when I'm only doing one a day it's nice to keep my kotgr thread nice ...

Hey there, I'll start off with highlighting some nit-picks and nice moments: Ironically, your first paragraph was going to be a nit-pick because I couldn't understand what it meant then ...