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3 more to go and I'll be back on track... Nit-picks and nice moments: the girl named Ivy said , “This is amazing!” Only know he went quite far away ...

Hey again, Nit-picks and nice moments: sorted through them until he found a simple, rusty key. "one" would probably fit better than "key" here. “Well c’mon! There should maybe be ...

I realise this is a lot to catch up on but ever since I caught up on 95 episodes of Critical Role, 30 chapters feels like nothing xD Nit-picks and ...

Genuinely just did a happy dance when I saw you'd posted this :P Nit-picks and nice moments: Now they were here in this sing l e moment where everything was ...

*Yawns because she had 3 and a half hours sleep last night and it's starting to catch up to her* It'll be fiiiine... Nit-picks and nice moments: The ground felt ...

Hiya, I'm a wee bit distracted but want to review this before it gets out the Green Room. Nit-picks and nice moments: “It learns through exposure, and I programmed Mouthbot ...

Hey Holy, when you gave me that summary I actually remembered really enjoying chapter 1 of this. So here goes! Nit-picks: That was too two times today plus something was ...

Woohoo! Caught it before it left the Green Room! Nit-picks and nice moments: It almost hurt to think of her own people living in - she shuddered- slums. Maybe I'm ...

Hey there, here on behalf of RevMo for my tenth review of the month :) Nit-picks: A man’s brain is filled with thoughts; a writer’s brain is filled with ideas ...

I made it! Barely any nit-picks: “He is busy,” she said, with emphasis on the ‘busy’ part. “Oh, right.” Tejal sent the crane arm flying back through the docks, unconcerned ...

Okay, I swear to god I'm going to catch up today :P Nit-picks and nice moments: She dove past the third floor, and most of the second I still think ...

Heyo, not sure if I'll get this one done before I get out tonight but worth a shot. Nit-picks and nice moments: She must have slowed down, because when Ellipse ...

I was going to do an intro line as usual but: She could jam her tofu-filled chopsticks down Tejal’s throat, which would force him to get some protein for once ...

That went well... At some point you're probably going to get a whole load of these at once... hopefully. Nit-picks and nice moments: “Unnecessary,” she grumbled. Then she tried to ...

I'm going to attempt to get three of these done today, so here goes! Nit-picks and nice moments: I had a note to myself written here to make sure it ...