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Hey Lauren, you're third up on my LMS-chapter-2 review express! Nit-picks: All of this is to say that, when this particular storm rolled in it brought something more than thunder ...

Hey, you're the second stop on my attempt to catch up with LMS chapter 2s! Nit-picks: It really stung Ronnie knowing that her parents left her with her brother for ...

Hi Omni, you're first up on my tour of LMS chapter 2s today! Nit-picks: In a last ditch attempt, Wong stepped through dimensions and arrived fairly unscathed. This is kind ...

Hey, just the one nit-pick this time, then I'll get onto plot and stuff: After what seemed like a long time, Alison spoke. “So, what do you think?”“About what?” Missed ...

Hey again, no nit-picks this time so I'll just get right into it. So, I think I'm going to need it explained soon why they seem to be quite so ...

Hey Elinor, I decided today to work my way through the LMS week 2 submissions thread, which has brought me back to here! Nit-picks and nice moments: Alison kept the ...

Hiiii finally getting round to this. There was a lot of planning for a dungeons and dragons type thing towards the end of last week so didn't get much time ...

Hey, almost forgot about this with all the LMS going on, but here we go! Nit-picks: Somehow, Asha got the feeling that what Yuni was really saying was, “You deserve ...

Okay okay okay one more review then I have to go plan for dungeons and dragons. Oddly, I think this is like the fourth LMS novel I've noticed to in ...

Okay, I'm allowed one more LMS review then I have to go do my own writing things that I am currently hiding from. Nit-picks and nice moments: “No one chose ...

Hey killeham, I saw you saying that you were hoping to get a few more reviews, so I thought I'd drop by and help out :) Nit-picks: Dark brown eyes ...

Hi again, still working away. Nit-picks: Edna could imagine. Sometimes Marguerite didn’t know who Edna was and confused her for her sister, her mother, her grandmother, her best friend from ...

I think I may be reviewing this until I can face writing for camp nano again today... Nit-picks and nice moments: trying to remember how long it had been since ...

This is my way of telling you that the link does in fact now work :P Nit-picks: “It's a portable one. There's some ponchos, emergency blankets, a spare pair of ...

Hey Blue, looking down at the reviews it looks like I've already left a literary comment. I was thinking about just reading through to refresh myself but I'd say I've ...