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Re: In the Hands of Six 1.4
Hey Omni, I believe with this I will be finished all possible reviews on novels I've been following for LMS week 4! Nit-picks: At certain points, he even managed to ...
Jul 31, 2018 -
Re: The Autumn Door - «2.2 Thin Air»
Hey Raye, I know you said I could drop this but I have this ridiculous desire to get to the top of the month review leaderboard so I'm happy to ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 4
Alrighty, let's see if I can remember what I was thinking when I read this on the pad. I am glad to get some more context about the club, but ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 4
Okay, might not finish this one tonight because I'm teetering on the edge of burnout and this is a slightly longer chapter, but let's see what happens. Nit-picks: downing the ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Homecoming 2.2
Hey Elinor, just so you know, the link in the LMS week 4 tab is to the publishing centre and I ended up finding this by searching the title. It ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Vyheria - Chapter 3
For a second I thought this chapter had to be like 5k long then I saw the review below xD I can't promise to be quite that thorough, but hopefully ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 3
Saying hi seems strange since I'm talking to you on that pad while doing this... Nit-picks: When they arrived at the flea market, a bunch of people was already there. ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 1
Hey there, I'm going to go through pointing out nit-picks as I go then talk about the chapter overall at the end. Nit-picks: Leaving a young woman to die in ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Slate and Earth Chapter 4.2
Hey Lauren, what better time to start my week 4 reviews than the first day of week 5 :P Before I say anything, for some unknowable reason I thought Esther ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 2.2
Hey Pan, hiding from my own LMS by reviewing other people's :P Nit-picks: When she took Hildegarde’s hand, her grip wasn’t damp, exactly, but it was moister than usual. In ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 3 (LMS IV)
Alright, I do believe that this is the final LMS week 3 entry that I'm aiming to read. Let's go! Nit-picks: Her head still pounded with the pain inflicted by ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: The Autumn Door - «2.1 Thin Air»
Hiya, didn't get round to this for a while because I was trying to avoid burnout but review day seems like a good time to start again :) Nit-picks (this ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 2.2]
Heyo, here is my attempt at being more articulate than I would have been on the pad... I'll let you be the judge... Alright, here we go with the plot! ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 2.1]
Hey Saen, stop 8 on my tour of LMS Week 3! Nit-picks: “About what?” Cass hesitated. The way Cass is the first word after this speech makes it look as ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 3
Hey Mess, stop 7 on my tour of LMS week 3! Nit-picks: The ground was rock solid from months of freezing temperatures, and pain shot up her hip into her ...
Jul 26, 2018