ExOmelas

Alrighty, I've made it to the most recent chapter. Nit-picks: “Well we appreciate that, but I am afraid we can not. You know the rules any person wanting to join ...

Hi again, I just wanna say I've just started this and already it is so so much smoother than the first two chapters. Nit-picks: "I'm sorry to have made you ...

Hey again! Nit-picks: As I looked around I noticed everyone around was squads of demon hunters, thankfully. Why the "thankfully"? "So it's true, the demon maiden is here. You wanted ...

Yay, I'm glad you made it in time for this week's submission :) Nit-picks: she felt an a c ute sense of awakeness Just a typo. Do you want me ...

Hey, I'm here. Will probably leave grammatical and spelling stuff, but I'll still do nit-picks like picking up on particular sentences or plot details. Will do overall stuff afterwards. Nit-picks: ...

How the hell did I not see this one xD Nit-picks: “We don’t have gas,” Dameon said, blunt. “Our wise leader has decided it pollutes the planet too much. Is ...

Hey Mea, stiiiill hiding... Nit-picks: The air was cool, with a unusual bite for a summer’s night, even in Canada. I'd kind of figured out that Vitas was basically Canada, ...

Hi Mea, I'm between ideas for where to take my own story so I'm just hiding from it and reading other peoples' instead :P Nit-picks: A team was in, so ...

Heyo, I'm kinda tired but don't really want to go to bed yet, and this chapter seems shorter, so I think I might squeeze in a review. Nit-picks: Jade turned ...

Hey Mea, I'm reviewing this in the breaks in a tennis match, so I might not actually get it finished tonight, but let's give it a shot! Nit-picks: There she ...

Heyo, I have Lizzie Bennet Diaries on in the background but you'll be glad to know that your story is distracting me from it instead of the other way around ...

Yay, something to review! Nit-picks: A warm sensation built up in her eyes and rolled down her cheeks, and she kicked a tree trunk beside her. I realise the warm ...

Hey Lauren, you said something in your reply to me last time about an "unholy infodump", so let's see what you've got for me... Nit-picks: She thought about her cellphone ...

Hiya Sae, one more review and I'll officially be up-to-date on my LMS reviews ^.^ Nit-picks: if there had actually be other hikers on the trail. Just a typo. looked ...

A-ha! There you are, you sneaky chapter! Nit-picks: “Is that what you want?” he prompted. “Would you like to fall out of my favor this soon?” How exactly did she ...