Evolmega

Eh ^^ sorry allow me to correct myself, By 'Beggining' I meant after the first 2 lines, I didnt really think that was a good way to start a poem. ...

Haha ^^! Uhm. Well, I agree with the first comment; It was a bit long, kinda. But i really like this, its cute and made me smile while reading ^^ ...

I think this was great, has a deep meaning to it, including the fact that you wrote it in a short time, ;o. Goodjob! Keep writing =)

Okay.. Icaruss covered most of it O.o. This poem, 1- Has no meaning 2- Plenty of rhymes, but useless in meaning. 3- Not to be offenseive, isnt called poetry, It's ...

Whoa :O. I liked this alot, very well written, easy to picture =o. But yeah, It is sad :shock:

Hey, thanks for commenting ^^. Yeah, I'm trying to work on non rhymes lately, gives better meaning to it and some-what more describable, anyway thanks!