Evilzombiekitten

Thank you for the review. :)

In fan fiction you are meant to already know the characters, you are already meant to have a connection with them , also i would hardly call you review a ...

Okay thank you for the tips the hugging pandas is her voicemail.

Thank you for this review, i will be improving this as soon as i can , and i'm glad you liked it.

Thank you for the review, this was a new type of writing i was trying out and i will be trying to improve it.

Thank you for the advice, i am not to good with grammar, so hopefully it will get better with my tutor.

Okay sorry for snapping at you, thank you.

Smut... all he does is kiss and lay on his lap... not exactly smut... its what romance is so are you saying that some books are smut like the mortal ...

Cringe why, i understand its not good in fact its my worst work but its my first fanfic so...

Yes Mundanes and non Malec shippers will not understand

It is just a very short fanfiction for The mortal instruments. I hopefully will be adding more soon