Evi

Bonjour. Again. We're becoming quite well acquainted with each other by now, don't you agree? :D So, this one is rather short. It shouldn't take me very long at all! ...

Hey again, Hannah! I have come faithfully to finish what I started. First of all, I'd like to clarify something: I like this 'patchwork' series. After re-reading my critiques, I ...

Hey, Explosive! I'm Evi, and I shall be your reviewer today. In fact! You have reviewed two of my pieces, so I'm just returning the favor! Run, rabbit, run, You ...

Alright! It's Evi again. So, this has absolutely sothing to do with the last installment, not to mention nothing to do with caterpillars, pulverized or otherwise. I'm going to have ...

First of all: Hi Hannah, I'm Evi, and I shall be your reviewer today. I've seen you around before, and thought I'd like to see your writing. Secondly: EEK! Holy ...

I was eleven when World War II changed my life. Blunt much? Try not to start off with something so solid. My father had already gone to fight and my ...

The trees were always there, A silent warning not to pass. It was a rule I kept to: Don’t pass, The repitition of 'pass' bothers me. Synonyms, perhaps? And there ...

It’s cold here (comma here) but I quite like this frozen prison, hidden and concealed under the blanket of snow. I’d ask (Ask the neighbors what? There's no question.) my ...

*sobs uncontrollably for a few moments before getting herself together enough to make a halfway-decent review* This. Was. So. Sad. And, I kind of hate you at the moment just ...

Ancient statues standing tall, noble visage, broken all, they've stood for near a thousand years, they'll probably stand for a thousand more. one too many syllables They watch us live, ...

So long ago, so long ago that no fleshy mind remembers it, and yet so strong is his legacy that even now the mere whisper of his name makes those ...

Perfect lines of oak trees smile on me today, their leaves dappling my dark brown skin in freckles of gold. Central park has never been so beautiful. The first sentence ...

Hola, my name is Evi and I shall be your reviewer today. :D If you add an 'L' to my name you get 'Evil'. There's a reason for that. Waiting ...

Maginifico! First of all, I fail horribly at the technical aspects of poetry. As in, punctuation, capitalization, and line breaks and all that boring stuff. However! I hope I can ...

You critiqued my story; I am here to return the favor. Ah, the nitpicks. On an evening as dark as soot and as chilled as death, two men were walking ...