Evi

Hey Alec. ^_^ I'm just going to make some general suggestions and point out a couple of typos. “Just a few more minutes, mom,” sounded Marcus’s response, muffled trough the ...

Hey Young gun, Evi here. I saw that this poem was ever so tragically shoved from the first page with only one review, and I decided that I must remedy ...

Hey AquaMarine! ^_^ Evi here. That's a great idea, making a movie with a poem screening over it! And we all love sunny days, so even better! :P This is ...

Hey Kinera! Welcome to YWS. ^^ Alright, so. I was actually very impressed. I can't exactly put a finger on your meaning, but you've got some great images in here ...

Hello Twigg, Evi here today. ^^ Rain pelted the ground outside; bolts of lightening light the sky like a giant torch was being flashed on and off. Mr Rodaway was ...

Hey meggy! ^^ Evi here. So, I agree with the previous reviewer-- you're main (and basically, your only) problem is that this is a bit too much backgroudn info and ...

Hey Luvzi! ^_^ I saw this nice, short little poem, and since that's about all I have focus for at the moment, I thought I'd review it! :D Alright, first ...

Hey Dakota! IF you remember, a long time ago you requested a critique on your Wyndolyn peice from me. I've recently checked, and you've already recieved a good number of ...

Hey Lil_Pau! ^^ Here as requested. I know I'm late, but I've been super busy, and I'm sorry. >_> But we can always use advice, so hey! Here we go. ...

Hey pinkangel! I wrote out a whole review for this, and then my computer totally ate it, so you’ll have to bear with me. >_> Let me just give you ...

Hey Ashley! ^_^ Evi here. :arrow: Flow & Punctuation So, I did enjoy this. But I'll get to that later. Right now I just want to mention some of your ...

Hey Krupp: To be honest with you, I felt this poem was very lacking. The concept is interesting, and you had some very nice similes in there, but I think ...

Hey Wolf! ^_^ Here as requested. So, first of all, I really like the way you start this out, with the 'What do you fear the most?' bit. It's a ...

Hey Galerius. As a quick disclaimer-- I've been looking over some of my past reviews, and I made so many typos, it's not even funny. Please ignore any and all ...

Hey Tigger! ^_^ Sorry for any delay. So, I'll start off with some overall comments. I thought the narrative was a bit stilted. Thsi is partly due to the present ...