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Hey Holly, here as requested! You said you wanted me to review this because of my ever-endearing, gut-the-crap-out-of-this-thing style...so, you asked for it. :P I am going to do line-by-line ...

Hello! First of all, as this is going to be continued for a larger work, should I move it to General Fiction Novels/Novellas? It doesn't feel complete enough to be ...

Hey Orihobbit! First of all, like Lydia said, I think the title could use some rethinking. It's not about mediums in general, it's about one certain medium: Ink. Ink is ...

Hey, I'm Evi. ^_^ Love the title here-- that's what made me click it. Just outside the Common's [Commons'] dining room window, a soupy thick fog danced. Since Common is ...

Hola! "Do you think this will ever turn into a real crown?" she asked. "A silver circlet with studded diamonds. Or maybe"-Dinah's eyes were distant now-"Maybe a gold one with ...

Dems. You're crazy to think that this sucks and mine is "so much better". xD I don't have time (or material to complain about, actually) for a full critique, but ...

Here as requested, Elinor. Sorry it took me so long to get here! I really like this idea and the conflict it expresses, but it's lacking a bit. She smiled ...

Okay! Let me continue. “Why are you still going?” Mariam asks. The red watch is close to Aleksandra’s ear and she hears her friend’s voice very clearly, as if it ...

I know, I know, it took me forever to get here and I fail as a CBF. I express profound amounts of sorrow and implore forgiveness! But it does look ...

Here as requested, Flower! :D So, I didn't like this anywhere near as much as the other poem I critiqued of yours. The idea here has been done a million ...

Hey Tanith. EDIT: I'm going to get someone to move this into Other fiction, if that's okay with you-- it seems more like experimental prose than poetry. EDIT 2: You ...

Welcome to YWS, Gnome! I absolutely adore your username. This was very solid writing. I think your characters were interesting and powerful and the idea behind it intriguing. There was ...

Firstly, I feel that I should warn you that my review will be wildly inferior to Navita's novel-critique! I did skim the comments between you two, though, so hopefully I ...

Hannah is my CBF (Critiquing Best Friend) so I couldn't ignore her blog request. ;) Hope you're enjoying the site, Adam! not to miss the night sky's beauty ere the ...

Barrett! You get my 350th review, which shall give me my first blue star! Such an honor, I'm sure. The book I had was pulled off my shelf as a ...