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That was good, I really enjoyed that! The poem was real, that's what I enjoyed about it, it seemed to flow perfectly. It was simplistic and not too harsh on ...

Wow, that was really touching, I really loved it!! I love it when they fight but come together in the end! I love that mopey stuff... Overall i thought though ...

I do find this very interesting, me and my sister yeah we get along but... I don't know she can sometimes be a right pain in the ass, I totally ...

Heya! I really enjoyed you're first poem, the way it rhymed and flowed together, I could tell what you meant and how much soul you put into it... the second ...

I enjoyed this story but got slightly confusing at the end, to make it longer you might want to define what you mean by the line about "He's Just In ...

I really, really liked this! so much feeling, tension, I believe that if could elaborate just a tad bit more then it would be even greater then it already is. ...

Heya, good story. One thing though, when you are writing you need to be a little more formal for example: 4 secs, should really be, four seconds. I also agree ...

Brilliant story!!! Really good, I was in Boston at the time of the twin towers falling. Scariest moment of my life when I heard that my friends father had jumped ...

Hey, Cool story, I like how the character is deep, has a harsh past, really interesting. Just a tad bit of advice, when you start to write and get into ...

Really enjoyed it!! Love soppy love stories like this!! But I'm not sure the boys would have made up so quickly... I have guy friends and trust me they hold ...

Hey, it was a very interesting poem, the title really drew me in... Window, simple and very open. I didn't understand something's though... For example 'don't hurt me, I'm not ...