EvensLily

I absolutely love the title, Crossroads, a perfect name for a romantic novel. I really enjoyed you're writing too but you need to really look through and re-read things before ...

Brilliant! I really liked this. I enjoy this type of writing, with the dragons and danger but not so much that it scares you out you're seat. I liked the ...

I really like the title of this piece of poetry, very good! Some things I felt you described too much, the usage of long words didn't seem to fit well, ...

Hey! This story was very good, had a lot of feeling to it, though I think you could have made the difference of time just that slightly clearer I sometimes ...

Hey! When I read the title I was excited, I love a good soppy short love story and then i suddenly found myself crying... Oh god! This story was so ...

Heya, This was really good... If that's the right word! I loved the title it drew me in. You need to work on you're grammar and punctuation before you post ...

Hey, I enjoyed your writing, though it was slightly blocky in places. Like the person said before me maybe you should re-read things before you post them focusing entirely on ...

Heya! I thought this story was really quite good, I enjoyed it a lot and I want to read more! Grammar and punctuation was okay, didn't really see any problems ...

Heya This is a great piece of writing, a great title choice too. The 9/11 attacks saved my life... not you're normal title, Its great! Like someone said before me, ...

Hey, This was great, so great! No, really! anamnesis, such a cool word, it's become my word of the month and then you hit me with Sisyphus... I have no ...

Hey, This piece of writing was good and well presented on the page. Good strong characters that seemed to go well with each other, the only problem was it was ...

What a brilliant chapter! I could find nothing wrong with it really, but it was so good! The only thing I would change is the little fight she had with ...

Hey, I enjoyed you're style of writing and I got drew in! Though you made a slight spelling mistake: he herd the anger in her voice... I think it should ...

Heya! It was you're title that really drew me in, I'm not sure why but the word I, is much more important then I had realized thank you for the ...

This poem was good, dealing with Loss is a hard subject so a lot of thought needs to go into what you are writing about... just like you did! You ...