EvensLily

Hey WIWWfreeze! oh, and welcome to young writers society. I'm Evenslily and I'll be your awesome reviewer today, if I say so myself :) I'd like to start of by ...

Hello my friend! I love this poem, it's deep and meaningful. The way you use imagery and metaphors is really good! The only problem is you need to update the ...

Heya, GawravMehta. It was lovely of you to leave a comment on my page, I will do all I can to help a fellow writer :) Just a few NitPicks: ...

hello, Cannonball! I would just like to say, did you use a translator for the English version? I don't think you did, and if you didn't wow. Absulutly brilliant english. ...

Heya Zee, This is a curious piece of writing, I lover the era and your great way that you write. It's really fantasic! Just a few NitPicks :) the armoured ...

Hello sharitm2! I must day this, but your writing is so mature. Your use of language really excells what writing your age group should be writing with. The only problem ...

Hello Noelle, we meet again :) I must admix that... I LOVE Peter pan, him combined with Harry Potter where the two boys that got me to love reading! I've ...

Heya! I think this poem was really good, really isightful, lovely! There is just one thing I don't understand... I don't understad what it's about. To me, reading it, it ...

Haha, I have to admit, I LOVE THIS! I have never thought about it - ever. I have tried to wright the life of a chair and failed miserably, but ...

I thought this was actually very meaningful , I had never thought about how a voice, could make a difference. For such a nice piece, i think you might have ...

I really enjoy your writing, something about the way you write seems to be read of the page with such ease! It was truly a brilliant chapter with a great ...

I really like this! I think it's really good, I'm not that great reviewing Lyrics but I'll try... :) Your use of language is impressive, especially for lyrics, normally people ...

Hello, Firstly I would like to point out that your writing I found, quite mature, Yes, I do enjoy reading your writing style... what you were writing about not so ...

Heya, Just a few grammatical errors :) Me and Kayleigh - sorry but I'm picky, it should be Kayleigh and I. holiday without me. But when - I thought. But ...

Hey, I thought this was a very good poem, it was hard to read at parts because your (great) vocabulary use, for my age, I didn't understand what you meant, ...