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Re: A love wrecked by society
Hey, Cello! As far as the flow for this poem went, it was actually pretty solid. While certain areas were bumpy, and I'll point those out as I go along, ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Dress How I Please
Hello, Cello! I've been wondering how to review this for a while, but I guess in a sleep-like state is how to do it. If you need me to clarify ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Cat's Meow
Hey, Cello! I'm back here for another review. Fun fact! Cats treat humans as other cats. Big, hairless, clueless cats. Maybe that fact will inspire a sequel? :P As far ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Colors
Hey, Cello! I don't normally review poetry, so let's hope that this is good, shall we? :P I like the message behind the poem, especially since it speaks out to ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 32 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey! I'm back for a quick review. I'm in a jittery state right now, since I'm kinda worried about Jiminy. In both the Storybrooke and the Enchanted Forest worlds, so ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 31 (Once Upon a Time)
Alright, Song! I'm back here with another review. Again, as I usually start out the review, this needs to expand upon its scenes more. There is so much great material, ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 30 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Songmorning! I'm back here with another review! I apologize if most of this appears to be speculation, but I do hope it ends up being useful! Like most chapters, ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 29 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Song! I know you're in Zambia, but hopefully you'll be able to see these reviews when you get back! One: Ow, my heart
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 28 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Songmorning! Although it has been explained this chapter, I still wanted to comment on it because it had been nagging at me for a little while. It feels a ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 27 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Song! I'm here for a quick review. As I think I said in the last Storybrooke chapter, I'm a bit wary about how happy it all is. There are ...
Mar 31, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 26 (Once Upon a Time)
Heyo! She said a long goodbye to Jiminy and Geppetto and a short one to Pinocchio, who she hadn’t known very long. My real question here is why aren't we ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 25 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey~! I'm reviewing as I'm reading, so let's see how this goes. :D everything in her life seemed to have magically fallen into place. Oh no, twelve chapters are left. ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 24 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Songmorning! Awh, that first paragraph was absolutely adorable and simultaneously heartbreaking at the same time. The writing style is really good at making me fall in love with the ...
Mar 28, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 23 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, Songmorning! I'm sure I say this about every chapter but they keep on getting better and better. From the introduction of Belle to the ending reference of Sophia, it ...
Mar 27, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 22 (Once Upon a Time)
Alright, Songmorning. Where do I begin here? YOU BROKE MY HEART. While that isn't the best way to begin, it certainly is a good way to sum up my emotions ...
Mar 26, 2016
