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Hey there! To be honest, I'm indifferent about this work as a whole. It didn't offer that much new to the table. The main character was talking about one of ...

Hello! Adrian here for a quick review. I've read all of the previous chapters, so I at least have general knowledge of what has been reading. Although, I would really ...

Hey, Emma! Adrian here for a quick review. The first thing I really want to comment on is the dream start. It's not new, it's not original, it doesn't bring ...

Hey, alliyah! Adrian here for a review. This is actually a pretty good article. It's clear, it gets to the point, it's organized, and it gets to the point rather ...

Oh boy. Well, there's no going back here, is there? Let's just pretend this was written as a serious work and not as a complete and total joke, shall we? ...

Hey, Eevee! Adrian here for a review. There's a problem with the word choice throughout the first few paragraphs, mainly with the word 'looked' and things like 'Lexi/she [insert action ...

Hey, Ats! Adrian here to review this chapter. I don't believe that I've ever reviewed something of yours, so I'm here to fix that. :P There's nothing really interesting in ...

Hey, Artemis! I'm jumping right in here with only reading one of the other chapters, so I apologize if any of my feedback doesn't go together well with the rest ...

Hey, Dogsrule! Adrian here for a review! Now that we know more about what's going on here, we need a plan to figure out how to stop the government from ...

hey, Holiday! Adrian jumping in here for a quick review! Keep in mind that I have not read the first chapter, so I'm sorry if I seem generally clueless on ...

Hey, HolographicLadybug! Adrian here for a quick Review Day review. I've read over this a few times and I have to say, I liked it. There are some things here ...

Hey, Pan/Waffle! Adrian here for a quick review. Erased Prologue So in the writing world, there's an entire history about prologues that should be read about before actually writing one. ...

Wolfe, it's been a while. (I say that a lot, don't I?) While I love Kyle, this almost feels unnecessarily dramatic. As I'm sure I've said multiple times, there isn't ...

Hey, sull191! Adrian here for my last review of 2015! First of all, I'd probably recommend sourcing the image of Chloe Grace Moretz and give the artist some credit , ...

Hey, JustPerks! Adrian here for a review, kinda. (Feel free to take this completely as a joke or as actual feedback.) This might be better categorized as an essay, since ...