Evalynne

Oh, that's weird, it's just put on the entire story in my review! I did wonder why it had so many characters... Dreadfully sorry, you probably got confused. Here's my ...

Oh, goodness, this nearly made me cry!!! The ending gave me shivers.

Sorry about the end of that last review; I accidentally pressed post before I was done, because I am very stupid and I am also a complete and utter imbecile. ...

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Wow! First off, I'd like to say that you are an amazing writer! I love the idea of this piece, and your imagery is beautiful. Your grammar is just about ...

Wow, this is so, so good! I love your metaphors and imagery, and I also love the overall idea of your poem. It is really well written, and although I ...

Well. This is ... Interesting.

Thank you! You honestly have no idea how much your reviews mean to me! I'm going to work on Leanne's character, as suggested, and the wording and stuff, so thank ...

Thank you for the review! I'll definitely work on fleshing out Leanne's character a bit more! Thanks again! Love, Evalynne

Thanks so much for the review! Yes; when I was writing this, my keyboard was ancient, though fortunately I've got a new laptop with keys that actually work properly (yes!), ...

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to work on the points you've mentioned! Once again, thank you! Love, Evalynne